Have your own Gods and leave me choose mine
Mine’s the gold of a sunshine
Mine’s a storm invading the infinite
Mine’s a monk meditating all night
Mine’s a cloud guarding the above
Mine’s a couple fallen in true love
Mine’s a raindrop holding life’s essence
Mine’s a beggar sharing few crumbs and being generous
Have your own Gods and leave me choose mine
Mine’s the gold of a sunshine
Mine’s a mountain facing years
Mine’s an orphan sunk in tears
Mine’s a valley after rain; wet
Mine’s a farmer sowing lands with his sweat
Mine’s a rock standing ages
Mine’s a patient still praying in late cancer stages
Oh Have your Gods and leave me choose mine
Mine’s the gold of a sunshine
Mine’s a spring in bloom
Mine’s a widow paying thanksgiving in her doom
Mine’s a tree purifying air
Mine’s a child in a wheelchair
Mine’s a plant in bud
Mine’s a soldier out of blood
Just have your Gods and leave me choose mine
Mine’s the gold of a sunshine
Mine’s got galaxies in his name to preach
Mine’s got no book but love to reach
Mine’s is everywhere; no need to search
Mine’s lives in no mosque, in no church
Mine’s not the one you need to be a priest to cherish
Mine’s universal; not a Buddhist, Muslim, Christian or Jewish
Hi Mira Jay! This poem is absolutely gorgeous! I loved it!! Thank you for sharing! 🙂
Subhan Zein
Thanks… enjoy it dear
I’ve written about this exact subject too, wow- uncanny. As a believer in tolerance in what seems a very intolerant world nowadays it just rings true.
Very well put!
Pete
Thanks Pete…it’s just a reply to those sinners preaching that God has an identity..to those making people fear his majesty instead of loving him…to those who think they know about his glory the most…
This is wonderful, Mira! I think your sentiments reach out to many more people than we realise. Lovely stuff.
Thanks dear…i think it’s the right time to stop asking “who’s your God?” before “What’s your name?”
Reminds me a little of the James Kavanaugh poem “Of Heroes ” Well done, thank you…
Thanks & i loved your morning story…
i’ll check that out; i’ll be glad to read for a rebel like me..
Now that I am at a PC instead of the tablet, I was able to find –
‘Of Heroes’
I have never much admired heroes and celebrities
or public martyrs
Whose deeds are properly applauded and whose vanity is warmed
even behind bars.
Nor have I been taken with chastity and celibacy and varied
and sundry virginities.
my heart is moved by the middle-aged lady who walks her cat
or curbs her dog in the early evening
And goes home alone to a little apartment
where virginity is a cold fact
And not a jewel in anyone’s crown,
Where martyrdom is not measured by white robes or assassination,
But by a single place setting and a lonely two-week vacation.
Written by James Kavanaugh
thanks for this; truly appreciated..
I checked his biography; he was a former priest rebel, so I’m grateful for introducing him to me..
Thought you might…
Love this one. Great work . Wonderfully written.
Thanks…glad to see your comment
Im not into poem but I love this one and I can relate to my “non beleives” nature
thanks for dropping by; enjoy it
Oooh, this touches me so hard! I think exactly like that! Very well done, Mira!
If everybody thought like you, we’d live in a much better world!
great to know there’s who think the same…:)
I walk in the light of the Silver moon as well as the Golden Sun…
This is wonderfully written
I enjoyed it very much…
Thank You for sharing with us….
and Thank you for following my thoughts.
i appreciate your kindness…
I am enjoying wandering through your
corridors of thoughts…
)0(
maryrose
Take Care…
You Matter
thanks for the sweet comment…it’s such a pleasure to know this………i enjoy your thoughts as well
long day of listening to people preach “their’s is the way”
and I am not sure how I came back around but I did, and it was like the wind blew away the others words and sat yours in front of me again…
it is now a breath of fresh air for the SpringEquinox….
Tank you again!
Take care…
)0(
BlessedBe
So sweet& I’m honored to receive such words from a talented writer like you..
Thanks again; May you be blessed
This was stunning…..heartfelt and well written….thanks for sharing!
Celste
glad to know you enjoyed it…
Thanks for dropping by & welcome any time
Mira, I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. If you wish to accept it, please visit this link for details:
http://celestealluvial.wordpress.com/2012/02/23/versatile-blogger-award-5/
Congratulations
Celeste
thanks…it’s so kind of you& I’m honored
i’ll add thanks to you to my first award because it’s been few days on that & you know i don’t want to drive boredom to my followers… your name will be added to the caption of versatile award logo at the side of my home page, thanks again; you’ve made my morning(K)
& congrats to you
Dear Mira Jay,
desculpe-me mas escreverei no meu português, pois falo tanto inglês quanto entendo de física quântica!
É muito bom vislumbrar as potencialidades que os blogs nos abrem ao nos permitiram conversarmos sobre o que produzimos com pessoas que dificilmente conheceríamos por outros meios que não os digitais.
Achei seu poema um pouco longo demais. Porém ele é belíssimo e a temática é muito boa. Eu me senti contemplado com seu texto e o resumiria em: “Tenha seus deuses e me deixe com o meu. Meu deus é ateu.”.
Um beijo enorme e um grande prazer conhecer seu blog.
J.
EU não sou ateu, tenho um Deus universal…
any way thanks for dropping by & commenting
Oi Mira,
Visitarei mais vezes seu blog.
Ah, não havia achado que você é ateia. Minha sensação com o texto é que foi essa.
Beijo
Espero que vos traz paz não importa o que foi sua opinião:)
Intense, moving, emotional, beautiful….Thank you.
Oh thanks for dropping by & for the sweet comment as well
Lovely poem…..:)
Zahir 🙂
thanks…
glad to know your mind
I like this poem, even though I’m not that keen on god or gods. It’s so much more than the usual ‘write something then break it up into random lines’ poem that you sometimes read.
Glad to know u did…
whenever i see the ignorant talking in the name of God when they know nothing about him, i just get frustrated & this was kind of breathing….
thanks for dropping by
really beautiful and so true
Thanks for dropping by..
True for The TRUE:)
I love this poem. BTW. Mine is fractals of light, mine is the diamond of dew in morn’s first light.Mine is the hand stretched out to help, mine is a deserted beach except for kelp. Mine like yours is everywhere …do they know each other …………… do they care. 😀
sweet….I love the expression “diamond of dew”
they might be one; who knows!
Glad to another rebellion:)
YES!!
Mira, your beautiful poem has a lot of wisdom within it! Life in the world would be so much better if many truly followed the path of loving your fellow brothers and sisters as one would love themselves!
it’s pleasure seeing a Spiritual like you seeing my almighty as a source of love,peace&goodness not as a rebellious move against God…
Thanks for reading&commenting
&May you be blessed by his glory
Who knows who, what, where, God is. As Sonny Terry, the blind harmonica player sang, “I can’t see love but I can feel it. and that’s good enough for me.”
Yea..I do believe that blindness when hits the eyes; beats can create perfect sight, but the problem is when blindness hits the deep then no eyes can see even if the original are wide opened..
nice. I can relate.
great; welcome to my religion then:)
ha, ha
i didn’t say that
for a period of three years… I was on my own…
but that was cause I was fighting against believing in anything…
yes, after my heart was broken 😛
but last year the kindness of one person made me realize that I cannot be like that
i believe in the christian faith
but I still relate to what you’re saying
&Who said that True Christianity, True Buddhism, True Jewish or True Islam don’t belong here!
I’m only against those people creating a God of language other than love & of religion other than light..
then thank you… i am glad we think the same
Love is God… and he is our light
And God does exist in all of us, so we have those qualities in us, too 🙂
at least I think so.
True…That’s exactly what I meant by saying “lives in no book” & refuse saying “HE”; who ever told you his sex!
I like that 🙂
yes, I don’t agree with the “He” either…
I guess I am just so used to talking like that now…
I should try and stop that 🙂
btw, you said “his” sex!
gotcha!
ha, ha… kidding… I got your point.
It’s only in reply to your classification…
yes, Mira. Okay, Mira. You’re right, Mira. 🙂
I advise you read “By the River Piedra I sat & Wept” for Paulo coelho; you’ll notice God’s feminine side..
Okay. I will get it after I get back from work today and read 🙂
wow… first time I feel myself a good instructor:)
I like your idea about God.
And you’re the first woman arguing with me about the He/She thing…
I always thought about that 🙂
So, you see why I wanna read.
Then you’ll love what you may find in the recommended book
I got it. And read a few chapters today.
I was wondering whether how he describes women think is true?
And if it is how the hell does he know? 🙂
Gosh, it’s such complex thinking Pilar has…
Must be tiring living with thoughts like that.
I’ll not say how she’ll turn, don’t want to cut the thread of your curiosity, but when you say Paulo Coelho; everything’s possible; He’s the Master; soon you’ll read a poem I did about him..
looking forward 🙂
is he the master in this field?
like your fave author?
He’s one of my Favorite; can’t say one favorite; I read for many; each has his path in life, so can’t compare&choose one…but Paulo’s spirits keep me up
okay…
Wow! This one is truly AMAZING…
Keep it up Mira…
Cheers! 🙂
Thanks dear; You ain’t be a believer as you said, but I doubt you’re far from mine..
Haha…! Not exactly Mira… I have much beliefs on living GOD’s…. 🙂
& who said mine’s not alive!
Every atom of the infinite holds the non-defined sex of grace…
But even that atoms must keep some priority know? Especially in our case! 🙂
For I believe that we draw our life not the inverse; I say only the infinite has the right to draw the limits of my faith & beliefs…
AGREED…!\m/ 😀
Got you well now Mira… 🙂
Keep posting….
Have a great Sunday ahead….
Cheers!
same to you…. it’s Saturday here:)
Haha! Here too… 😀 😛
reading it again makes it clearer
i love this 🙂
and your idea of what the almighty is
Glad to see you here again
& it’s not an idea, it’s a belief..
This feels like an anthem for me – extraordinary humanity, in what is a thorny subject, but you took away the thorns carefully, one by one. I remember flying back from South America 20 years ago, after seeing so much killing in El Salvador in the name of organised religion (well, they, the fanatical religious government, ended up even shooting the country’s bishop Romero, when even he said ”enough killing”, so it went further than ”officalised religion” to people deciding they were now god), I remember a nun sitting next to me in the plane, offering me a cough sweet, her bitterness heartbreaking as she wept, her hatred for the men in Rome so strong as she recounted her experience helping the peasants of El Salvador and pleading with her church to stop playing politics and helping to cause such misery.
I like the ideals they have had over the past years in the Baltic republics (Estonia, Latvia and Lithuania), their belief in the power of nature and symbolic wisdom of trees.
Thank you for this piece Mira. Absolutely beautiful in its detail, and so real.
Thanks for sharing an incident of your life..
&bows to those who had survived the repression of the Russians due to their dances & love to nature!
Love & Light