Just before midnight played its Symphony
Knocked a Princess’s bedroom window, a blue Nightingale.
Melted her body so shy in its night gown like golden honey
Till the Nightingale set his tender tune, setting shyness on sail,
And a journey on a starless sky deck began
Where honey beneath dancing snow lit the dim Moon
That lit stars and ordered breeze to form his Princess’s fan
To get the honor of her dance, he sewed the night to a suit of an elegant tycoon.
Midnight’s Symphony, the start of a royal ball, declared
Where no drinks were served, yet drunk went everything:
The ears from the tenderest ever divine rhythm heard,
The eyes from the twinkling star destined to make her Majesty’s ring,
And the senses from the cloud burning her feather in to incense.
Everything seemed to happily serve harmony along the Two
But the jealous Sun with the crawling dawn sent the Moon his death sentence.
Glimpsing at him withering over his deathbed, scared she flew
Back to her room; broken-hearted, bleeding eyes bowed to pray
Their Hymns tore Sun’s merciless heart that grew pale and pale
But the Princess’s neither raised nor shined that day
Until the desired Prince knocked her window again with his gentle hail…
well written
Thanks for dropping by& Thanks for the follow, now I’m a follower too…i loved your dusk
Lost in a dream, but is it? What dreams may come, and what of jealous moons who have no light of their own…
Beautiful work… Thank you for sharing
Can you deny that everything special occurs with the moon! every romance; every dream & every celebration..
that’s what drives the sun jealous; she gives him a part of her light but he steals all the hearts leaving her no precious company…
but I’m a night lover any way
oh thanks for the comment dear
Lovely 🙂
Thanks and for drawing a smile on my face:)
that’s SO romantic! i could feel the honey dripping off of your words…
and i love the sun sending the moon to a death sentence! nice one! 😉
Thanks Nanda & yea it’s my hidden side..:)
“the music of the night”
yea and I adore darkness:)
Wow….this is epic….love the description of the moon and the suns jealousy….how inspired and beautifully depicted….thank you
Celeste
Thanks Celeste…Glad to see you enjoyed it
Liked it! Very well written
thanks
wow, this is so romantic Mira, I love also the image u used …
thanks..glad to know that
Your poetry is vivid and comes alive from the stage area. 😉
Thanks for the sweet comment
Glad you’ve enjoyed it
Here it goes :
The Nightingale at Midnight – Dreams unspoken, lost but not forgotten.
The Princess – The self within – hidden but nourished.
Midnight’s Symphony – The elegant struggle between the real world and it’s perception.
Wonderful , elegant and convincing !
Wow…thanks for the analysis!
Well I’m in love with the night time & through it I find a special harmony…
freaking A!
this is real poetry, Mira…
So nicely you have used the words 🙂
i like…
my fave line – “Where honey beneath dancing snow lit the dim Moon”
Pleased to know you liked this piece…
Enjoy the perfection of harmony