The ocean touches grace
When sun kisses its face
Then dives in deep
Leaving nature to weep
Passionate gets the dusk breeze
Robins seek a hide in deserted trees
Sky puts on its black gown
Few Diamonds shimmer its crown
Darkness embraces with fears
Till the glittering moon appears
Over faces smiles return
In bedrooms lusty candles burn
For lovers to sprinkle charms
Lashes ravel mysteries for arms
Lips invite moisture to lounge
And greedy ones all passion scrounge
On beds of roses, emotions wallow
Even ache there tastes mellow…
That’s only one show, and summer’s crowded of similar nights
Where nothing stops the beat even red lights
Summer’s beauty certainly brushed with magic
Wish it never fades away in a nature’s show; so tragic
Soon snow will crawl through the dark like a thief
Stealing life from every hanging leaf
And acting like a wild whore;
Knocking down the safety behind every door
Soon thunder will trigger violence
Killing with no mercy romantic silence…
Three months a summer and nine spent in remorse
Yet no complaint may change nature’s changing course…
Such vivid imagery. Very well done
Thanks dear..
Much love
Lovely ! Nice rhythm and flow 🙂
Thanks Aparna; glad you’ve enjoyed the flow
Love & Light
Yes. Beautiful images and rythm. Loved it
Thanks; pleased to know you mind..
Peace & Light
Your words burn like lusty candles. xx 🙂
Thanks my dear & so are your saturated stories; I’m sure I’ve missed a lot of them through the last 3weeks..
Hugs
………..o, Mia, I love this…………..and am reminded (as you know) that beneath every winter blanket, a single seed remembers the sun……….(and that is enough). We know love and remember love, and because of both…….we are always love. ~ Ever, Bobbie
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Much love my dearest one
………………………………………………….;-) love you to pieces……………………………….
mmm…………blessed may be you day…
Love & light
divinely beautiful nature in the tapestry of your words! nothing can beat your rhythm MIra!
Thanks Soumya; it’s such an honor to hear that from you..
Love & Light
Your enchanting words always serenade my heart dear sister! You were missed but you more than made up for it with your radiance that shines…Much love to you Mira!
Thanks dear Wendell… same here; I’ve missed your lit spirit & the way you ever rise my fallen skies..
Much love back
You have returned and haven’t lost a beat! The words paint many a vivid image – each perhaps more so than the painting! Excellent!
a beautiful poem, reading this is a great way to start my day! thanks! xx
Thanks; glad it has created you a good start.. may your day keep its track..
Peace & Light
Thanks Nell; missed your tender presence..
Love & Light
Your imagery is powerful. Nature is our teacher.
Your last few lines are trained with intensity. How easily you can bring seasons of life, and with a lesson in your last line — You have the substance to accept and live.
Rhythm is a powerful tool, and your beats are in harmony.
Blessings.
Love. 🙂 🙂
Pawaaaaaan; your gentleness is what’s powerful…
Thanks for the evaluation; valued from a poet like you..
& regarding the closure; I hate Winter & all I can do is running after Summer from field to field because no complaint can make the first disappear:(
Thanks for the blessings; badly needed..
Love & Light
I hope — seasons would treasure your emotions equally. 🙂
Thanks though I doubt winter can;)
Hugs
Hmmm….attachments in life, memories to draw a circle — let us fly away.
Blessings. 🙂
mmm….
Much more back
This is such a sensual ode to the change of seasons. I love how you layer your words with life “sky puts on it’s black gown”….. Only you can fill such haunting magic in the air and your words are not written always painted. I cherish your poems…they are a treat to the senses.
Thanks for the rainbows you send with your thoughts…
I do cherish your poems as well, for they hold a special scent..
Much love to you, dear Sur
Wow, Mira. this is definitely one of your greatest ones. Keep it up.
Love,
Thanks Stephan; glad to know you’ve loved this & actually the love my pen is met with here is a reason to never get out of ink..
much love back
Your dark side is wonderful. Rich. Real, rips and shreds, them gently pasted back together, exactly how YOU want it, in your fight you win only with words over nature’s triumph over us.
I owe Mother Nature all I have; it’s shameful pointing my sword to her chest, but sometimes I just lose control and swords hidden in my words decide the start of an already-lost-battle..
Thanks for the value visit… much love
This is so wow!!! OMG!! Such imagery, such power in your words.. 😉
Thanks dear & talking about powerful words, I’ll have the chance to say again that yours have got it in many ways…
I do enjoy your flows; keep them going.
Much love
aaww.. thank you.. 🙂
You’re most welcome…
Love it my dear…..felt every beat of every word…..I think I even smelled the fresh rain of a storm….:)
Bravo Mira…..I always love your work and find it enlightening as well as refreshing…..
Celeste
xo
O’ Celeste thanks; I’m pleased to have your senses stirred:)
By the way been a long time that I read anything holding your signature; hope to do soon.
Much love
So glad I stopped by, beautifully written words! 🙂
So Am I; thanks for leaving your signature
Peace & Light
Like winter
Hearts can freeze and stall
Never hoping to hear the call
Of newness and hope
Where cold lies– warmth copes
Where heat burns– calm elopes
Till fresher times
Come summer and wind-chimes
Birds leave their nests
The world’s alive
But the pure white
The brittle snow
The steamy air cannot follow
Into broad daylight
Everything’s flourishing
Without rest
Nicely put; thanks for your time..