The Queen died with no funeral
For silence’s ordered by the Black General
Obedient to his will, acted my all except an anxious breath
Couldn’t I mourn my Knight’s birth on Queen’s death
Like a blind; what I never enjoyed, I can’t worth
And how am I supposed in grief to welcome my birth!
My Knight’s born over Universe throne
Everyone bowed to the gold he shone
Kidnapped me tranquility to paradise
To wake me later a shocking surprise
To me the proud knight’s
kneeling down
Kissing me freedom
as embracing my head his crown
No more the feet
touch the ground
I’m a butterfly
that jasmine abound
Ripened secrets like
maple sugar seep
Lost which to pick and to which yearns my deep
Finally chose the secret of secrets; The Rock
It was heavier than Gibraltar’s rock
That I fell back ground; ceased breath
I fell to fall again and deeper to my Knight’s death
The Queen came back to revenge my Knight
Revenging me too, for I didn’t mourn her last night;
But why? Can a slave grieve the death of the arrogant ruler of the empire?
And how? Have you ever heard; sun’s been mourned by a Vampire?
A Vampire who’s brought to life only over her cold cell
And as coldness steals warmth, she sends him back to hell
You have such an artful and beautiful way with words. I always love your work!
Thanks dearest Scott; honored..
Looking forward to dive your oceans again..
Love & Light
A lot of intrigue Mira ~ enjoyed – wonderful write 🙂 ~ much love … RL
Thanks sweet Robyn; glad it caught your attention..
Much love back
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Thanks for embracing me with your love..
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You have a powerful way with your words, Mira. Really saturated lines that touch with so different intensity as keeping reading.
Thanks E.; pleased to know you were touched..
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This is quite the tale you’re telling – and it’s an incredibly vivid one! Great poem!
Thanks Nell; glad to get your stamp over here..
Much love
what an imagery and beautiful story in your lines! you leave me hypnotised!
O’ dear Soumya; you’ve left me lost whether to say “sorry to hypnotize you” or “glad to do so”…
thanks for dropping your beats here; much love
I am lifted by the excitement in your words, and it feels good to touch your smiles radiance again as it gives them life! Very nicely done…i am spoiled by your words! Much lovd go you always!
Your radiance adds a unique taste to my poetry… thanks for the love you embrace me with; I’m blessed
Much love back to you dear one
I never get tired of reading your beautiful words …., as if being in it.
Thank you Mira ….. really a great job.
Much love,
mei
Dear Mei; I’m glad this could change your mood..
Much love back to you
Intriguing fantasy you painted with your words Mira! Wish you a wonderful year ahead! Love!
Thanks Aparna… same wishes back to you
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A little bit Edgar A Poe, a little bit Lewis Carol, an a lot of Mira Jay, you’re an enduring mystery, the poem is always about the poet, I need to ponder once more …
That’s more than I can hold dear Peter; the names of such great people left here honor me… thanks for the wine you always carry me…
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So I wonder knowing it’s about the poet, Capricorn rules by delegated authority, the Lady in waiting can only dream of her Knights heart promised to another. One who takes his vitality, drinks it in, yet still find the strength to adore the true heart. She mourns or his freedom, yet loves his devotion . . . This is what I see anyway ….
mmm…I’m just a night-lover dear Peter & I loved the way you’ve sipped the story..
Much love go to you Mr. Profound
In the dark it is easy to pretend … (Phantom of the Opera) Thought you might enjoy following Make Believe Boutique – http://makebelieveboutique.com/2013/01/10/4804/
I’m already a reader of Susane & frankly I enjoy your comments over her posts; the way you analyze her quotes is simply deep..
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Good to know … she helps me validate my thinking …
She’s full of Light; I do enjoy the world she carries me to..
Love & Light to both of you
Mira Jay, this piece is so intriguing. It is passionate, and yet sad in a way that I can’t quite put to words. I remember reading once that loneliness and grief visit us together. In our loneliness, we grieve for the person we were before (without all the pieces missing). It’s odd how slow the body is to realize our loss. I love this ~ this wonderful onion of emotion and feeling. ~ Love you, B
Bobbie…. I loved what you’ve found upon your dive here specially that part about “the missing pieces”
Much love to you always
I actually thought a bit more on this during my drive to work this morning, and I kept coming back to the title. Regardless the circumstance, when it comes to love, we may think we’re ‘done’, but rarely are we right…. ~ Love you, B
mmm; well I’m glad I’ve stayed with you this long:)
& actually it’s passion & the current title is what I could put for “Birth over Death”…
Regardless of the poem & the heart it holds; I agree to your last point; “in the end all’s right, if it’s not right then it’s never the end”…
Much love back to you…xo
xo
Many a sense is stirred to life and as always,you stirred it well:)
Thanks Sirrah; glad yours were:)
Peace & Light
Mira, thank you for stopping by my blog today. I look forward to following your poetry.
Take care,
Ivon
Thanks for leading me there & regarding your visits; you’re most welcome.
Peace & Light
I just don’t understand from where do you get such Abstract ideas.
You are the gifted one! Hats off…!
Well neither do I:)
Thanks for the gentleness you’ve signed this by..
Peace & Light
I feel many emotions from your words, Mira, and you paint with vivid imagery…wonderful, as always! xoxo
Lauren
Thanks Lauren for the honey you dress your senses with & welcome back; you’ve been missed here..
Love & Light
You’re welcome, Mira, and thanks to you, too! It’s good to be back, even if it’s a slower pace…xoxo
& I’ll be glad to taste your honey from time to time..
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Thanks Soumya; I’m blessed with your generosity.
Much love back to you
An elegant, epic tale.
Thanks dear
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Beautiful words (as always) and a quite intriguing little story too.
Thanks dear Alex..
Peaceful weekend
Another great write. I cannot tell you how much I enjoy your poetry. I thought you were taking a break. Then I discovered the “Reader” thingy here on WordPress….Keep it up, Dear!
Thanks; glad to know you’re touched..
& regarding my irregular blogging; I was & I’ll be on a long “away-time” this time..
I’ll miss your spirit till I be back again
Peace & Light
Get better soon…sending Light to you
wow, I love how you play the words and bring such images to your readers, I always love your piece…
Thanks dear for the embrace…
Love & Light