With sun’s last ray; gently, he stepped in to my shop
Withered cheeks; a confession of blood drop
Confident lips overthrown by fear
Fearing nothing but the possibility: he gets near
He robbed my heart as he got the song he came for
His goodbye smile shattered my core’s core
He’s a robber!
Ground was shaking against my beat
Crawling darkness wished to fleet
Back again, again we met
Before sunrise a pleasing sunset
He drew me closer till we unite
Drawing on my shoulder a kiss so light
“Metamorphosis” Painting by Vladimir Kush
His lips blanketed me over sand
Couldn’t resist every touch of his hand
He roamed my skin;
Out and in
Till every inch begged for more
Smilingly he showered
each in galore
Thirsty I was indeed
Drinking love in greed
As he responded in focused tender
Till our ecstasy woke up to thunder
I’m grabbing a pillow and wildly wet..
Ticks ticked no more; breaths found no outlet
Since that dream dressing gloomy mood
Six months; intolerable interlude
He’s a robber!
In steady steps; strolled my shop another time
Yet seeking no rhythmic rhyme
Beats ding; others in swing
He’s a robber who wrapped me a diamond ring
Oh he’s a robber!
🙂
May you always keep the smile…:)
Happy Valentine’s
Refreshing to read your rhythmic poem! Happy Ventines Day dear Mira, love, A
Aparna thanks for the warm embrace..
Happy Valentine’s
I am so glad could read your wonderful work again Mira, thank you.
Happy Valentine’s day.
Love & hugs,
mei
Thanks Mei for the ever sweetness….xo
Happy Valentine’s
I miss it Mira, Happy valentines…
mmm…happy Valentine’s dear Will
Wonderful to read your poetry again, Mira.
Thanks Stephan; looking forward to listen to your beat again..
Love & Light
Very nicely done! Happy Valentines day to you Mira! May your day be a very awesome and beautiful one my sister!
& I badly miss your smoothness…
Happy Valentine’s
simply a wonderful piece. . . Hope you have that robber in your custody. ❤
mmm… thanks, I was robbed once & it’s fair enough:)
Peace & Light
exotic,rich gorgeous, intense,passionate,splendid,nomore adjectives left 😉
A very happy valentines day to u Mira
Soumya….Soumya, I’m showered with your admiration; thanks & happy Valentine’s..
Can’t wait to read you again
Mira, I’ve missed you terribly….but as always, you were worth the waiting. Every true love and every passion is a story of unexpected (and unexplained) transformation. If we are the same person before and after, it surely means we haven’t loved enough. Beautiful read on this most wonderous of days. ~ Love you, Bobbie
O’ Bobbie & I miss you more & more…
Can’t add a word to all that you’ve said; thanks for the love..
May your every day be a Valentine’s…xx
Lovely to see your writing again, Mira – it was missed. Beautiful beats through your words 🙂
thanks dear… looking forward to sipping your Haiku again..
Love & Light
I want a robber like that, Mira! haha
mmm….needs a Genie:)
Hugs
Welcome back!! And what a return this is – an explosion of passion wrapped with words!
Not back yet dear one or you’d have seen me on your page:)…hope sooner than I expect…
any way thanks for love you circle me with; much love back
Another strong effort. I especially enjoyed the symbolism of posting this on valentine’s. Also, the definition of a robber was quite romantic here 🙂
mmm..thanks Alex; your comments always have a different taste…xx
looking forward to reading your stories again
Love & Light
These are special words I will hold dear from your heart …
& so dear you are Mr. Profound.
Thanks for the Jasmine you always bring along..
Love & Light
sigh 🙂
Guess it’s so easy to guess the person behind the sigh….:)
now that i know who it was…
i’d have to say “his loss”
It’s no business to evaluate gain&loss in it…
Peace & Light
It’s good you think like that
Cause something’s we wish for are not good for us.
Life is a good teacher that way.
We’re all students; what matters is that we make sure our graduation date isn’t that too early:)
Mila,
Everything is always on time…
When that graduation comes you will see
Everything worked out for the best…
The divine does not give us more pain or pleasure…
It’s usually equal parts… And when we learn to accept both and remain thankful… That is peace 🙂
No comment & please do no more twists to my name; it’s becoming annoying.