Seconds drift like years
Knitting more fears
A shadow of mine escaped the crowd
Broke in tears a proud cloud
Uncaring for a pride falling to a creep
Darkness keeps secrets in the deep
Breathless turned an eye
Towards a marvelous sky
Was it sky’s garment over-glittering?
Or my crystals were behind that much twinkling?
Couldn’t I realize which was true?
As I couldn’t stop tears for a proper view
And how could I when you sleep cold!
You’ve promised with me to grow old
Why you’ve gone this fast?
What a spell to cast!
“The surreal “painting by Rob Gonsalves
When I was around four, in love with a star I fell
Used to dream of it as well;
“Beyond that twinkling star
The Lord has hidden a jar
In which he collects spirits
Not any; just those of royal merits”
Wish that jar’s there for real
Glimpses of your wandering spirit, all night I’d steal
Weird’s life and how time rules every game!
Seems like yesterday when you spelled first my name
Today that you’ve become for whom I yearn
And tonight you’re ashes and I’m your urn…
become for whom I yearn
And tonight you’re ashes and I’m your urn…
As usual you are creative , you are taking the reader to that place , the place that can’t be described
Thanks for embracing me with this sum of admiration…
But kindly notice that my words are my beats, and as skipped beats bring harm to the heart, so skipped words bring harm to the meaning, so please when you quote for me, don’t skip any..
Hugs
Your poem is an exquisite treasure! What a priceless moment to embrace your words again! Thank you for the smile which decorated my morning! To know you are well is a special gift, it means our God has watched over you! May His blessings and love always surround and embrace you each day of your life! Love hugs and blessings to you my dear sister!
Dear Wendell; first of all, I miss u much..
Thanks and more for the blessings; your presence always embraces me like Spring…
Peace & Light
Powerful sentiments, Mira Jay. No doubt, you always have something important to say, and somehow you find the words to express it so well.
Be well, dear one.
xoxo
Sweet Sue, miss your tenderness..
Hope life’s treating you smoothly..
Love & Light
Mira – I am not sure what it is called, but I will call it blended rhyme … You use it so well to wrap the reader into your heart, and to walk with you through your experience, of growth, paring, and longing to renew … always we are captured by your grace, and longing for you to find joy – Love and Light always!
Thanks dear Peter for knocking my door with Lotus every time; and don’t ask me why Lotus 🙂
Much love
I’ve missed the heart that speaks such a delicate (yet powerful) language……….the soul which carries love without need of proof. ❤ I love and miss you, Mira Jay.
& I miss being embraced by your tenderness as well as your smartness…
Hugs to your lovely spirit
Your words make me cry, they are just exquisite. Every time. So glad to see you again.
Prayers, wishes, and some smiles for you Mira.
Sorry about the tears I’ve driven..
& thanks for the wishes; much more back
Peace & Light
Don’t be sorry, your words are just beautiful and I just connect to them. I’m so thankful for
Please don’t be sorry, your words are just beautiful and I literally feel each one of them. I’m so thankful for that 🙂
Well seems that I’m sorry for all those I draw tears in their eyes regardless of the reason:(
Any way thanks for being around with all this love; much appreciated & by the way your message left me wordless that I couldn’t even reply. I owe blog-sphere being surrounded not only with talents but with caring people like you..
Thanks again
Love & Light
Sadness drifts and we seize our happiness as we may. All the best, Mira.
Ah Stephen; we really do…
You’ve been missed here, and thanks again for the exquisite beats you’re blending with yours..
Love & Light
Very nice roll to this.
Thanks; glad you’ve enjoyed it..
Peaceful & Light
Exquisite expression , feelings of despair and sadness,when minutes seems passing like years.thank for visiting my blog.Regards.
Thanks for leading the way there..
Peace & Light
You welcome.
I like the wording.
Thanks dear..
Peace & Light
Starlight, your essence reflecting
Beauty only innocence can see
The firmament will crumble
In ode to life’s symphony
May you live a life in harmony with life’s symphony..
Peace & Light