Fallen walls; awaited guest
Silent calls; hidden passion request
Dancing Balls under my chest
Rise… Fall… Rise again then fall
Fibers ache to answer your every call
Vivid thoughts bringing pieces to a whole
Come in; baptize me with your wit
Gaze in to my eyes and cross me, so I’m lit
Let’s dine fish and wine before we split
Stay more; don’t leave me alone
Have another glass; let’s share another dawn
For this; only for this I’ve taken of life a Loan
Be no angel; O’ at least not tonight
Embrace me with your arms not with your light
Allow me pull off the curtain to what you ignite
Be no angel; invite me to share a lone sin
Pour your scent over thirsty skin
Set a breath-race and let’s see who’ll win
One tender kiss painted over pink
One touch arousing silk beneath the silk
One.. Only one promise signed with vein-ink
so beautifully written Mira Jay! Many thoughts rushed my mind as I read it 🙂
mmm… pleased that I could have erased some stubborn thoughts:)
much love
There are all different tones and tensions going on here, not only between her and him, but also her need to survive another night. The title…really powerful..and gives the verses that little bit extra.
When a poet doesn’t lie the result is raw. And so very intriguing.
It is so pleasing to almost, but not quite, drown in quality.
Glad to know your mind specially about the title; wasn’t sure about how properly may others see it… thanks for the precious visit, always my pleasure..
Peace & Light
The title is delightful, Mira Jay..that’s why we add chilli peppers to food, for exactly the same reasons..
You’re right but seems it has skipped your mind that for many chili is just that unhealthy ingredient added:)
My mind is not interested in those not brave enough to spice their menus, or who claim to enjoy tasteless life: my mind is not motivated by those who will not try a new taste. But someone who reaches so far,who take such risks – yes, for them my mind is interested, fascinated. Let the many fear the unhealthy ingredient – they do not live life the way I admire. And when I admire it is with full heart, mind and plate full of chillis of course!
A chili-mind… cheers dear
The passion evoked by this piece is intense. I dare say I felt the “beats.” Great job as always!
Thanks Nel. glad you’re touched..
Love & Light
Very nice…
thanks dear..
🙂 Words are as passion – best when there are no rules. The minute we start drawing boundaries, it stops being love and stops being worth the fall. Beautiful (absolutely) Mira…. I love it!!! Wow! ~ Love you, Bobbie
Thanks Bobbie; as always pleasure to read your mind..
Much love back
🙂 I knew I felt something!
“& Supper not yet cold”……..:)
hugs
ahhhh……….I knew there was a reason!!!
There’s always a reason but sometimes it just robs me my reason:)
Peaceful day
Yes…….I know how that is too! 🙂 You too, my dear one! You too! ~ Love ever, me
wonderful I am speechless
mmm…many times silence speaks louder:)
Peace & Light
Wow, that was a terrific one, Mira, One of your best.
Glad to know you were touched; thanks for dropping me your mind…
Love & Light
Quite a song of your soul with everything in it – crescendo, diminuendo, ritenuto, tempo presto. Not a single beat missed or out of place.
that’s a musical mind… glad to view it your way..
Love & Light
So enchanting Mira! you evoke the passion,you wait for the moment, the desire of burning and being desired is tremendous here. Its like a candle burning in the darkness and yearning for the warmth that it itself possesses..,
“Be no Angel” conveys the want of being a normal human ,without resistances and inhibitions.. . A whole synopsis can be written on this..great!
Loved the way you’ve described “the candle”..thanks for dropping me your light..
Peace & Light
This is extremely passioante….i love it.
Your flow of words mesmerised me…..it was like black magic! I was in a spell.
“gaze into my eyes and cross me so i am lit”……..the charm of a beautiful dream.
Definitely one of my favs on your blog….
O’ dear & your presence has lit my place; missed you much..
Thanks for leaving me your honest beats..
Love & Light
Vivid and passionate, Mira. Cork popped and poetry poured straight from the soul. 🙂
mmm…do we have another wine-lover here or what!
Cheers………& much love
sweet.
Beautiful 🙂 poignant yet vibrant … I am glad i followed a link to your blog 🙂
welcome to my world then… glad you’ve enjoyed your first tour:)
Peace & Light
This is so beautiful… love your way with words. 😉
Thank you for checking in during the Hurricane… your kind wishes were appreciated!
Thanks for your visit Beth, glad to know your mind..
stay blessed..
Love & Light
You surely have a magical way to gracefully ink your verse. I felt this, and intensely i’m overwhelmed by these words. There are different thoughts in your wave, yet I was caught up with perfumed words in surrendering to love, and that makes me yearn for more of this. You found this and followed through the labyrinth — an aura of romance. A night. A desire. A time to lose the grip on life.
Knocking my dark night holding a gift of sunlight… Thanks dear Pawan; Glad you’ve enjoyed the flow & it’s always pleasure to view a piece of your mind..
Love & Light
high quality of words that shows passion and electrify… simply love it….
& I’m warmed to know you’re touched..
Much love back